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by hauntoftwilight

schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me when you update, I'm quite interested in what happens next!
person rainbow2007
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going it's good...just the text and font need a bit of a clean up..otherwise AWESOME
person alma
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting first chapter. Love that Draco is a marauder also. Three men in the Batman trio and only Draco and Harry. I can't wait to see how you pair that up. Yummy. You can't leave anyone out of the yummyness. All five deserve yummy, even if you need to yank someone else to America...like Blaise... he would fit right in. Hey, are you going to give poor old Alfred someone. Minerva is single...I think. Nobody ever seeems to pair up Alfred. He could use a good woman. And really, your five boys could all use a motherly influence. If you don't mind the age gap, Hermione could be a good mother figure. She likes to take charge. And, really, why not give Alfred a young hottie? Keep his blood pumping.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good start. I'm liking it. :)

This is a rare crossover, do you know any others? (Preferably slash)

Anyway keep up the good work and I look forwards to reading more.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like more please!!!
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Slightly confusing there. Hopefully more chapters will clear up the confusing parts, like why are draco and harry friends? another thing is what did Crabbe Sr. say that pissed off Harry? good story so far tho, i havent really seen too many HP Batman crossovers.