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for Bundle of Joy

by LadyTuesday

schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am so glaaaaddddd you posted this on here. I haven't had a chance to review on the other site about the next two chapters. iF any is wondering about reading this. Quite reading the reveiws and go back to read the story, the next few chapters are so awsome, I can't wait for the rest.


I totlally love this story. and they way they found out about each other.
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update soon!!!! I love the fic, its awesome.
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapter or two of this glorious yarn when they were first posted but have been without the internet for a while now so lost the thread a little. I have just spent a good while reading through this fantastic fiction again from start to - I was horrified to discover - the fall-onto-your-knees wailing, scratch-out-your-eyes-in-frustration, pull-out-your-own-hair cliffhanger! Nooo! But I honestly really did thoroughly enjoy every chapter, although I have always enjoyed your writing anyway, this fic is brilliant written and funny too, I actually lol'd a couple of times. And the last few paragraphs with the tense build up to their actually meeting had me biting my knuckles in nervous anticipation. Please put the next chapter up soon! I beg you!

Thanks for the story ~ Marie
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay .. so I amloving this story.. hurry up with the next chapter already!! PS aren't you also he author of Tying Knots?
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, before I go on to the next chapter, I had to tell you I am sitting here with a stupid huge grin on my face and giggling like a school girl! The hope in that chapter was palpable and I am off now to read the next one. Thank you thank you thank you for two in one day!!!! HG4eva
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Flaying you alive (although tempting a the moment ;-)) would not get me chapter 8, so I shall refrain. lol Seriously, that was all kinds of mean, woman! ACK! And, a week?! Well, if I have to wait (insert heavy sigh here) I can only hope they don't immediately turn from one another and run. A week? Really? Okay, fine! Yes, I'm pouting. lol

Thanks for the two great updates!
HG4eva
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*waiting impatiently for update* Will it be soon????
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
when are you adding more??? This is literally the first fanfic I've enjoyed reading as much as the original stories! I laughed out loud at the letters that went flying back and forth. Witty and enthralling... can't wait to read the rest!