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for Bundle of Joy

by LadyTuesday

schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. ~M
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wild applause. Huge smiles. Happy laughter. Pure joy. Hope.

All of the above courtesy of you. Thank you!!

Only two left...bummer...but you've done a terrific job. :-)
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have NEVER anticipated an update so much in my life. I have been checking every two hours or so for the last two days!

*weeps*

This is more painful than waiting for Tying Knots :D But seriously though I just read the last chapter again and it had my heart racing once more, I feel the horrible sinking fear of anticipation deep inside. Your writing is exquisite. Thank You! ~ Marie
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Shuffles around in anticipation, cleaning manically like Molly*

Please, Sweet Lady, an update?

*grin*
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*bows to the Master of Cliffies* Oh what a hook. Somehow I suspect they won't immediately launch into the baby-making after dinner.
person erisah
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn, "evilest cliffie ever" doesn't quite cover it! ARGH! I've been loving this story so far- I love how awkward their interactions have been, it makes it far more realistic than those stories where Sev and Mione suddenly get this "connection" out of nowhere with no plot development (Yuk). So far so awesome, but why did you have to stop it there?! I'm going to be wondering about the outcome til you post the next chapter :(.

Update soon!
Marie
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE don't make us wait a WHOLE week!!!!!!!
person CB13
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My dear Lady Tuesday,

"Flay me alive" isn't a phrase you hear too much, although I heard it plenty growing up. I can amost forgive your dastardly cliffhanger. Almost. Looking forward to that next chapter. This is a wonderful story!

And as if there wasn't enough pressure in your life, do you think that you will return to "Tying Knots"? I do so love the crackly static you've built between that HG & SS.

Cheers,

CB