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When I read your summary when you posted the first chapter I knew I was going to enjoy this. I really love this story.

But what if I don't want it to end? Can you be bribed/bought? Oh this is too good. It needs a sequel. Or just more. Lots and lots more. Now I'm going to pout.

You evil woman. You made me cry with this chapter. Thanks for the update.
Liz

I like it. Please update soon.

I... I... that was brilliant. I only just started reading your story a few days ago, and forcing myself to read it slowly. I couldn't help myslef though. It was too good to read only a chapter a day. And though I am exhausted from working late shifts, followed by school, coaching, writing, and reading, I couldn't help but finish your story. Very, very good.

The plot development is first rate and the characters are just so distinctly accurate! OMG, good job!

I can't wait for the final 2 chapters... perhaps you will see it fit to give us a bit of a bonus chappie!? PLEASE!!!!!!! Thanks!

All I can say is WOW!! This is such an amazing story and this last chapter was so unbelievable hot I almost can

You have been so good with this story. I look forward to the next chapter and the ones after. You made me laugh, cry, be upset, wonder what he will do, what she will do. Thank you so much. Let Me know when you update at lizalya13@yayoo.com.
Liz

Ok, i am not one to go all gooie and emotional over a story, but man, you almost had me going with that. I actually felt for Snape, and was bloody near close to crying because of his tears. You have written this emotional Snape perfectly, better than alot of the ff's i have read, mainly because it is him. You have taken the Snape from the books, and delved deeper in to his character, and because of that, I love and hate you. Man, i wish i could write like that. It was basically perfect. Heart-felt with out being all sappy and sickening, romaintic with out turning it in to a Hallmark card, and sexy without being trashy.

It was all just brilliant, and a beautiful story written by a very talented auther. Im green with envy, and, ill admit it, at little flushed...who knew that Snape could be so Passionate. Why oh why are there no men like him in the real world???

Oh fantastic. I was honestly worried that the meeting would not end in smut. Well, that would have been fine as well, but this was so much better. Woo-hoo, hot too. But the lemons add so nicely to the story without feeling like the point of the story. I love the emotional fragility and opening. Both of them are so carefully constructed individuals, and their need for each other is perfect. I love Severus' williness to expose himself, Hermione's playfulness, and how tenderly they both treat each other. What a gift you have.

This was brilliant thank you so much, very worth the wait! Two chapters, woohoo. I thought that their reaction to the discovery of their identities was grand, just how I thought they would probably act. And the hawtness! Phew!

Only a few chappies left but a grand venture none the less and very well done indeed, thank you for letting us all come along for the ride! :D ~Marie x