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for Bundle of Joy

by LadyTuesday

person wudelfin
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was just so cute, fluffy and sweet
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent piece! I will be very sorry to wait no more for your chapters. I loved the breakfast table scene and poor Minerva choking in shock, just perfect!
person andarte
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It is a very unique concept and was executed beautifully. :)
person shelagh
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
necessary??? OF COURSE it's necessay!!! Good heavins we have to know what he wants to name her. Oh maybe Joy? LOL YES WE NEED A SEQUEL!!!please?
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it please let me know when next chapter comes thank you
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As expected, I will be sad to see the story end, but it has been completely captivating and lovely from the first word. You pegged both of them so well in their "human" emotions the morning after. lol It's actually sad how differently men and women react to things sometimes. I look forward reading what was in the letter and how they lived happily ever after. :-)

Thank you for sharing your time, talent and story,
HG4eva
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Have you been taking lessons from Severus on how to be cruel? You are making us wait for the final chapter and it is driving me nuts! Crazy I say! Very mean! Please give it to us! We need closure! Hurry! Hurry! We need to see how this ends! I love the way you captured the true spirit and reactions of the different genders. I guess men and women do react differently for pretty much everything. But we need the rest. Can't wait to see your next story too. But we need the last chapter of this one, hurry!
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww... I love it, and you mustn't stop at 11 chappies! You just mustn't!!!! ... ... Okay, so I understand if you do, but I want you to know that this is a beautiful and brilliantly written piece. Thank you!
person jlclark
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! I have enjoyed this story so much. I am both excited and sad that it will be coming to an end soon. Even though it will be the last chapter please post soon because I am dyeing to know what happens.
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This wasa great chapter. I look forward to reading the final chapter.