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by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person LilCas
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like keep Writing!
person KellyJCR
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think things are going to take a turn for the worse before anything gets better. Thats what I sensing anyway. I love that Remus protects hermione so fiercely. I am hoping You tell us who was in the cabin and if they were part of the protected. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. I hope that Remus and Hermione will find shelter soon and that they will remain safe from the aurors. Update soon.
person Karen
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. However, I am confused about some things. Timing of this story: is it after or before Voldemort's fall. There are some small continuity problems. Early on, it seems Molly and Hermione aren't happy with each other, and Hermione is angry with Ron. However, when he comes to bring the wolfsbane, they seem to be on very friendly terms. Also, Molly isn't upset at all finding out Hermione is pregnant. When Ron brings the potion, he states how hard it was for him to get there, yet Sirius, Harry, Poppy and Molly have no such issues. Why?

Again, I like this story, and enjoy reading it. I look forward to more updates. Well done!
person Larrabee
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Spell checks:

Chapter 3:

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schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"only Remus" will be more than enough when you present him as strong and sexy as you do here:-) Thank you for two more chapters, I really liked them!
person KellyJCR
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well aren't they they the randiest couple ever. I love that Ron walked inon them serves him right. Looking forward to more I can't get enough of these two they are a favorite of mine. Well done!!!!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.