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for Why Not Ron

by ronsmistress

schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like ron,, is a good guy, and with a little bit of training. great boyfriend and lover.
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!! Loved the way Ron handled her father and that the mother was the more unreasonable one. You did say in one chapter that Ron would email pansy later and I had a good laugh at that. Story line and smut! Good work!
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know i have said it often, but you are my absolute favourite writer. I love the pairing Pansy/Ron sooo much and would like to read more. Hope you have the time and great ideas.

*bows my head in respect*

Beast (Patrick)
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron wouldn't know what e-mail is let alone be able to send one as electronics don't work with magic as well as the fact that one would need an internet connection which requires a connection to a provider. It should be "owl" the details.
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Ron/Pansy as a pairing. Lovely story.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see a sequel to this story ron and pansy in married life would kids! Great story just sad it had to end
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story. I've been very entertained too. Can't wait for your next update.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how the plotline with Pansy's parents are moving. I would take out the whole bit about invitations being sent to individuals but being returned in sets etc. It implies that everyone is coming as part of a couple, plus only 45 invitations or so went out, making a potential 35 couples unlikely. It's easier to skip the math and not mention it at all. Pansy's fiddling with Ron's sleeve is a nice detail.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good story. I am a big fan of unconventional ships and this is a very good story. Few spelling mistakes and missing words but you're doing quite well. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your updates.
person DarQuing
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's completely okay. I've read authors where it was months between postings. :P

I think it shows maturity on Ron's part to invite Mr. and Mrs. Parkinson. :)