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for Legillimens

by tripperfunster

person Peahen
schedule June 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

What I loved about this is that the characterization was accurate.   There was great humor (loved Severus and Minerva’s interaction esp!).  The memories were good stories and, it was sexy.

person Peahen
schedule June 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

What I loved about this is that the characterization was accurate.   There was great humor (loved Severus and Minerva’s interaction esp!).  The memories were good stories and, it was sexy.

schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! When I saw Severus/Neville story I wasn't sure about the combo but you wrote it brilliantly.

As for the Borgin and Burkes mixup, I bet they could have had a second shop in Hogsmeade. BUT since they trade in dark objects and Tom was an employee the village of Hogsmeade probably forced them to close their 2nd location after the Voldemort/Potter debacle.

Thank you for sharing your story :D
person HarryVik
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to point it out. But in the first chapter, where Snape is using Legillimen on Neville. Neville has his eyes closed. Legillimen is only done correctly if both parties are having eye contact with each other.
person HarryVik
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it after reading it through. I hope to read more of your work soon.