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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this was awesome! Really well done. ~M
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I noticed you removed my review :(
I feel sad that you didn't take it in the way it was intended - as contructive critisim. I really enjoyed this story and I was only pointing out what you as a writer could do to make the reading experince more enjoyable.
I didn't say I didn't like the story.
*miserable this end*
I feel sad that you didn't take it in the way it was intended - as contructive critisim. I really enjoyed this story and I was only pointing out what you as a writer could do to make the reading experince more enjoyable.
I didn't say I didn't like the story.
*miserable this end*
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I hope that you will make a sequel to this one. I would love to see whether or not Severus and Hermione get married and if they do get married, will they start a family.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Yes please do another one.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a sexy story! I also enjoyed Ron as the antagonist. But Severus -- yummmmmmmyyyyyy!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow loved it!!! You should relly write a sequal! Your a really talented writer. I hope to read more of your work soon!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! But I have to say that unless there would be more external conflict between them other than Severus Snape's unwillingness to marry (after all, you did mention that he would do anything she asked of him) I cannot really see there being sequel to this story. Though I have to say I would be pleasantly happy if you proved me wrong! Great writing and I hope to read more of it in the future.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this fic! Great job. I would love to read a sequel.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say write a sequel!!! That way I can do a snoopy dance! PLEASE :-)
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this all in one go. Very nice job. Cute premise and a very Slytherin Severus - pointing out she'd extracted "no such promise" from him. Too funny!