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Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

I really like where this is going ^^ It's really hard to find a good Harry Potter/Anita Blake story! (At least one with Yoai! lol)
And my choises for pairings are:
Draco/Harry
Asher/Caleb
Severus/Remus
And yes, I do think Severus should become a vampire like Harry ^^

Thanks,
~Kera

Blast you! i hope you update soon. this story i so good. i look forward to reading more. please e-mail me when you next post.
twilight_mouri@yahoo.com
twilight

Just like to say I like your story. I love crossover fics. Hope you update soon.

~tas

gees...love the chapter but still all about Caleb...sup with that?

First of all (I'm sorry but I'm really trying to help you), slow down there! You're skipping over some details that you could use to take this story from a C/B grade story to an A grade story. You should also think about rereading the Anita Blake series...you could use the refresher on everybody's personality. Like for instance; the conversation between Anita and Caleb. Anita is territorial about her men and ever since CS Anita views Asher as hers. Also...Anita...well, she's not really a very girly person...frankly she's supposed to SUCK at those kinds of emotional conversations. And then Jean-Claude...he's like the most practical scheming character in the Anita Blake universe! He wouldn't automatically accept Harry and Snape! And also turning EVERYONE into something...it's over doing it (although I like the Harry being a vampire with the ardeur). Which brings up another thing...ardure? Come on...look the word up somehow! Either through another fanfic or go fishing through one of the books (that's exactly what I just did).

Anyways...I'm sorry to have ripped, and I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Harry/Draco, JC/Sev!!! XD, I agree!!! Asher/caleb lol Richard/Remus!! I vote for those pairings ^_^ LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!!! Update sooooooooon >=)

Don't stop the story there...this does semm to be a little too much Caleb and not enough Harry

wow that was awsome .. and i hope caleb is still pure for asher.. please please update soon .. later for now

angel