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by InLoveWithLove

schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter six

EEK! Oh shite! RUN!

OMG--very exciting--very well done--keep up the good work!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter seven

Luna and the rest are smart cookies to have come up with the climbing of the trees. It saved their energy, and their lives. Hopefully Hermione's idea will work for them.

To hear that the Magical infected are resistant to magic is freaking scarier than six kinds of sin. I'm surprised that they haven't thought to use cutting hexes or reductos to blast them to Hades... granted they have to be careful of the blood, but you know?

Well done--keep up the good work!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter eight

Oh my... very exciting... I wasn't aware that I was holding my breath out of fear for their safety until I reached the end of the chapter.
;)

Well done--keep up the good work!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter nine

Aww, it was so sweet that upon arrival Draco didn't want to let go of Hermione.
;~D

I love how Hermione's mind works of wanting to gather their loved ones from the other camps to keep them safe.

Great story!

Well done--keep up the good work!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter ten

WEEE! OMG--this story is getting exciting, and I find myself saying, 'come on, come one, get your friends, but be careful for everyones' sake!' LOL
:p

Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'There
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter eleven

I like how Draco is more confident after Hermione praises him for his flying skills. Anticipation factor is mounting due to the upcoming rescue missions, and potential confrontations with the Infected.

Well done--keep up the good work!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter twelve

Oooh! Very exciting!

Bummer about Percy and Penelope having been infected. Thank the gods that Mr. and Mrs. Weasley are healthy, and hopefully soon to be safe.

Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

'They were reluctant to go with out ["with out" should be "without"] her but she begged them to run.'
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter thirteen

HURRAY! They all made it out safely at the Weasley rescue mission.

I love how, dare I say, frantic Hermione was when she was unable to find Draco right away upon arriving back at the Malfoy vacation home.

Draco was a sweetheart to give Hermione comfort and reassurance when she was become overwhelmed with pain and sorrow due to the loss of her parents.

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Next up: Rescue Operation "go and get Harry, Pansy and Parvarti. And anyone else who didn
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter fourteen

Good filler chapter before the "'f'-it hits the 'sh'-an". LOL

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Well done--keep up the good work!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter fifteen

I love how Draco has Hermione's back. It is great how he is there to reassure her that she is alright, and not infected.

Later, he was so sweet to basically tell her that she's done great that day and needs to rest and have the others do some of the work.

Damn, they may have very well been about to kiss if it weren't for the posse of loved ones walking into the kitchen.

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

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