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November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg if this is not the best combo store i have ever herd so far i love it i cant wait for the next chapter
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I'm loving it. I can't wait for more!!!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter sixteen
It is good to know how much Lucius loved his family to have warded the place so well to keep them safe, especially when he decided to betray the Dark Lord.
*SQUEE*
I love how Hermione and Draco will be shacking up together in his room... with Blaise and Pansy, but they'll still be together.
;~D
Now then what is the deal with the uncomfortableness between Draco and Pansy?
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Well done--keep up the good work!
It is good to know how much Lucius loved his family to have warded the place so well to keep them safe, especially when he decided to betray the Dark Lord.
*SQUEE*
I love how Hermione and Draco will be shacking up together in his room... with Blaise and Pansy, but they'll still be together.
;~D
Now then what is the deal with the uncomfortableness between Draco and Pansy?
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter seventeen
*::tears in eyes::*
Aww, that was so sweet of Narcissa to offer herself to Hermione as someone to talk to with a shoulder to cry upon.
It is hard to imagine all of this crap happening within a 24 hour period... hey?
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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'Everyone seemed to be doing them ["them" should be "the"] same as her, ...'
*::tears in eyes::*
Aww, that was so sweet of Narcissa to offer herself to Hermione as someone to talk to with a shoulder to cry upon.
It is hard to imagine all of this crap happening within a 24 hour period... hey?
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter eighteen
OMG, Hermione is such a lucky girl to have a sexy, stud-muffin such as Draco being so supportive, huggy, kissing the top of the head, stroking the side of her face, massages of the shoulders and such, having her lean into/against his strongly sexy and naked torso (well not so naked in that he is only wearing a towel, 'Quite low on his hips too.'), sexy voice, and sultry glances. Damn, I'd buy that for a dollar and eat it up with a spoon!
;~D
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:
1) 'But all she could see was her mums ["mums" should be "mum's"] face as she reached for her dad.'
2) '... but she didn
OMG, Hermione is such a lucky girl to have a sexy, stud-muffin such as Draco being so supportive, huggy, kissing the top of the head, stroking the side of her face, massages of the shoulders and such, having her lean into/against his strongly sexy and naked torso (well not so naked in that he is only wearing a towel, 'Quite low on his hips too.'), sexy voice, and sultry glances. Damn, I'd buy that for a dollar and eat it up with a spoon!
;~D
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:
1) 'But all she could see was her mums ["mums" should be "mum's"] face as she reached for her dad.'
2) '... but she didn
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter nineteen
I'm glad that Pansy and Blaise are hooked up.
Draco was so sweetly comforting, and dare I say romantic, to wake Hermione, and then sooth her, after her nightmare, and afterwards sleeping next to her to help her get some rest due to his presence next to her. I'm glad that he did it on his own, and that she didn't need to ask/beg him to stay by her side.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:
1) 'Knowing that their ["their" should be "there"] was at least peace and love in the room, ...'
2) 'A blinding light was pouring from some where ["some where" should be "somewhere"].'
I'm glad that Pansy and Blaise are hooked up.
Draco was so sweetly comforting, and dare I say romantic, to wake Hermione, and then sooth her, after her nightmare, and afterwards sleeping next to her to help her get some rest due to his presence next to her. I'm glad that he did it on his own, and that she didn't need to ask/beg him to stay by her side.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:
1) 'Knowing that their ["their" should be "there"] was at least peace and love in the room, ...'
2) 'A blinding light was pouring from some where ["some where" should be "somewhere"].'
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter twenty
This really is a great story! You should post it over at "Granger Enchanted", if you haven't already that is.
:D
Mmm, I envy Hermione for having woken up in Draco's arms--lucky girl.
I'm glad that her friends were mature/helpful enough to have made breakfast, rather than wait for her to continue to play mother hen to the lot of them.
Luna is a dear sweet girl to understand why it is that Hermione isn't really very hungry, due to her still grieving for the loss of her parents, as Luna is for losing her dad. Ron is so sweet and caring for Luna to jump to her side and carry her out of the room to cry in privacy.
Dear, sweet Draco... to have his appetite be affected somewhat by Hermione's being off indicates that he is feeling either sympathy for her feelings, or cares for her on a more personal level, or both.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:
1) '... some one ["some one" should be "someone"] was in bed with her.'
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This really is a great story! You should post it over at "Granger Enchanted", if you haven't already that is.
:D
Mmm, I envy Hermione for having woken up in Draco's arms--lucky girl.
I'm glad that her friends were mature/helpful enough to have made breakfast, rather than wait for her to continue to play mother hen to the lot of them.
Luna is a dear sweet girl to understand why it is that Hermione isn't really very hungry, due to her still grieving for the loss of her parents, as Luna is for losing her dad. Ron is so sweet and caring for Luna to jump to her side and carry her out of the room to cry in privacy.
Dear, sweet Draco... to have his appetite be affected somewhat by Hermione's being off indicates that he is feeling either sympathy for her feelings, or cares for her on a more personal level, or both.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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1) '... some one ["some one" should be "someone"] was in bed with her.'
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter twenty-one
I like how Hermione thinks past the end of her nose and is planning for the future and continued health and welfare of those with her.
It is fantastic how Hermione's five friends are standing with/behind her as support in the organizing and leading of the survivors, rather than her taking on too much and cracking/burning out from it all. Lucky girl to have such loving and supportive friends.
*::tears in eyes::*
Oh man, that poor woman loss track of her children? No wonder she is desparate to find her babies.
:(
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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I like how Hermione thinks past the end of her nose and is planning for the future and continued health and welfare of those with her.
It is fantastic how Hermione's five friends are standing with/behind her as support in the organizing and leading of the survivors, rather than her taking on too much and cracking/burning out from it all. Lucky girl to have such loving and supportive friends.
*::tears in eyes::*
Oh man, that poor woman loss track of her children? No wonder she is desparate to find her babies.
:(
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter twenty-two
OMG--how freaking cool that Hermione's dad was in the Special Forces, former MI6. A total bummer more so now seeing as they could have used his skills and knowledge. It was a bit of a shock to have learned that Hermione's mum didn't know about it until Hermione figured it all out. It's good to know that there are men out there that can keep their lips tightly shut... huh? LOL
:p
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Great story so far--well done--keep up the good work!
OMG--how freaking cool that Hermione's dad was in the Special Forces, former MI6. A total bummer more so now seeing as they could have used his skills and knowledge. It was a bit of a shock to have learned that Hermione's mum didn't know about it until Hermione figured it all out. It's good to know that there are men out there that can keep their lips tightly shut... huh? LOL
:p
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Great story so far--well done--keep up the good work!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter twenty-three
I'm glad that Luna, Ginny, and Mrs. Weasley all took themselves out of the running for going on supply raids. It makes it safer for everybody that they aren't tagging along just to stay near their menfolk and then risk the lives of many.
They have some good eggs there in Charlie and George to be on the rooftops as lookouts for any infected, along with the two volunteers to assist.
This story is shaping up very nicely.
:D
I hope that it has not been abandoned. I'm only mentioning it because I noticed that it has been updated since December 16, 2008.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:
'She was a [The word "a" is not necessary.] good at it and it made her proud that she was like her Dad.'
I'm glad that Luna, Ginny, and Mrs. Weasley all took themselves out of the running for going on supply raids. It makes it safer for everybody that they aren't tagging along just to stay near their menfolk and then risk the lives of many.
They have some good eggs there in Charlie and George to be on the rooftops as lookouts for any infected, along with the two volunteers to assist.
This story is shaping up very nicely.
:D
I hope that it has not been abandoned. I'm only mentioning it because I noticed that it has been updated since December 16, 2008.
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Well done--keep up the good work!
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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:
'She was a [The word "a" is not necessary.] good at it and it made her proud that she was like her Dad.'