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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No....it's not terrible. I'm sure we all have moments like that. I wish I had a coworker that looked like Lucius! LOL I do have a friend that reminds me of the elves in Lord of the Rings, but that doesn't have any bearing with the Harry Potter world! I hope that things are getting better for ya. Great chapter! I'm surprised Hermione mentioned the charm on the necklace that Leda left her. But I guess eventually, and in a small way Hermione has to trust Lucius. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to the next chapter!!
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so far, can not wait to read more. I really wish the chapters were longer just so that I could have more of this to enjoy. I hope things get better for you soon. Try to write as stress relief!
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry you are having relationship trouble. I know how icky that can make one feel. I hope it gets better soon, though, it can take a while to work things like that out.
The chapter was definitely good! I'm just a little sad it wasn't longer, but it had a nice cut off place. I hope to read more soon, when you are ready.
The chapter was definitely good! I'm just a little sad it wasn't longer, but it had a nice cut off place. I hope to read more soon, when you are ready.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOO, I do like this, one question though...How old is Hermione?
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fun! I am looking forward to more.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, an update! Good chapter. who wouldn't want lucius' hands all over their body? *grins* sorry to hear about the muses going on holiday, but it's good to see that they are coming back. :)keep up the great work, and keep those chapters coming.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyable. I especially liked the bit about the charm repressing Hermione's personality. Perhaps she would have been in Slytherin without it...
Poor Lucius. I know he's generally not the pitiable sort, but you have to feel a little sorry for him, with what Leda probably has him set up for.
Hope you are doing better! Good luck getting your muses back into shape!
Poor Lucius. I know he's generally not the pitiable sort, but you have to feel a little sorry for him, with what Leda probably has him set up for.
Hope you are doing better! Good luck getting your muses back into shape!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I enjoyed the first few chapters of this - it shows promise and sounds like an interesting plot :D
Not quite sure if and how I will know there are updates to this - I don't check the site often.
Anyway, nice work and if I get a chance to read the read, great! If not, thanks for sharing anyway. Keep up the good work and best of luck.
Not quite sure if and how I will know there are updates to this - I don't check the site often.
Anyway, nice work and if I get a chance to read the read, great! If not, thanks for sharing anyway. Keep up the good work and best of luck.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Geeze, I'm offline for a few days and you sneek not one but two chapters up! As before, you haven't yet failed me with your flow and grammer and the like. Lucius Malfoy on his knees? Goodness, me, I may be coming down with the vapors! ;P
I don't think I've yet read a story that involves Hermione's mom - I like their excursion together! And of course they would run into the ultimate aristocrat himself. He does seem ever present when he is least (or maybe it's most) wanted!
Keep it up and add some more chapters soon!
I don't think I've yet read a story that involves Hermione's mom - I like their excursion together! And of course they would run into the ultimate aristocrat himself. He does seem ever present when he is least (or maybe it's most) wanted!
Keep it up and add some more chapters soon!