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for Daughter of Leda

by andarte

schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, things are becoming interesting. I wonder how things will go once Hermione is back at Hogwarts. Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
real good can not wait to read more of this... this story is getting real good so far. I like the flow of it. it is not to fast not to slow.. it is a just right flow
person Citten
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay things are getting good! i do have one question though: do we get narrcissa out of the picture or does she stay around still being married to our man? well i dont mean that you have to kill her but move her out of the marriage to lucius. okay even if you dont i will still read but i would personally like things better. :) i really want to know what happens next! :)
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry about you and your fiance. But if it has lifted you stress and bad feelings, then your body was telling you something. Anyway...

I loved that. I loved Hermione teasing Lucius. Lucius needs teasing. He needs a good spanking too. But that might be another story...lovely update...hope to read more soon.
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I like it so far! I just hope you post more soon! ~M
person Citten
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay loving this story!!! :) i do hope that what every you are doing that your muse can help and get involed shortly! :) i so do love this story and i do hope that this story will be nice and long! :) cant wait to see how lucius handles the situation. ;) poor hermione so fursterating, but i love the idea that you had the grandmother was interfering in her personality it makes things that much more fun! i do hope that you will update soon!! :)
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You'll figure it out. No worries.

I loved this chapter...poor sweet Lucius...he is such a delicate Slytherin. He needs hugs.

I'm so excited for more of this. Please update soon. AND FEEL BETTER!
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely delightful and entertaining read. I love the scenario that you have created in this story and look forward to Lucius' charms working on Hermione.
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.