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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have to say.... what is Snape one of the stupid lackeys from Stranger's Wrath? You hide behind something and instead of going to look, if they don't see you they loose interest? lol either way this was kewl...
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I rarely comment on anything I read because most of it is so poorly written, I see no need to continue reading past the first paragraph. Your story was different! It was so well written I felt the need to tell you so.
The only complaint I have, and it's very minor and highly personal, is that there was a bit too many British-isms for my taste. This is not a bad thing, it just kept taking me out of the moment when I had to stop and think about what the meaning was.
Overall, this was fantastic to read and I hope that, if you don't already, you get paid for your writing skills!
Oddessa
The only complaint I have, and it's very minor and highly personal, is that there was a bit too many British-isms for my taste. This is not a bad thing, it just kept taking me out of the moment when I had to stop and think about what the meaning was.
Overall, this was fantastic to read and I hope that, if you don't already, you get paid for your writing skills!
Oddessa