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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh wow, an excellent story. I love the premise and how you have things going along. I'll be keeping an eye out on this.

Chapter 1 - I haven't read past the first chapter, but I wanted to stop and give a little feedback. I'd get with someone who's inclined to poetry. Your prophecy doesn't have to rhyme, the HP one didn't, but the HP prophecy was at least cryptic. I'd find a way of rewording your prophecy in keeping with the HP style. It's not vague at all. Also the line about Lucius had memorized the names of every Slytherin and Gryffindor graduate since 1950 seems a bit farfetched. If there's supposed to be 1,000 students at Hogwarts and 50% of them are in those 2 houses, then 5 decades worth of students would be a few thousand names. Just food for thought.

Ah... This is intriguing me. Poor Narcissa to think that Lucius is cheating at her! Will Draco go and confront "The Woman"? I am so curious! Well done, please continue!

I like it. Please update soon.

arrghhh.... brilliant chapter, but Severus...Baby... his... Hermione... Kissing.....

Impatient this end!

ohh this just gets better and better. I'll be waiting.

I am loving this story. I can'wait for everything to come out in the open. Thanks for the daily updates! I hate it when updates are few and far between. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!!

Oooooooooh, story is looking good.
I reviewed on FF.net before, I see you updated a lot of of it here too!
Can't wait to see how it plays out, update soon :o)

It's okay. Not spectacular, but an enjoyable read. You have a huge amount of grammatical errors; might I suggest getting a beta?

Also it's obvious that no Snape has been placed anywhere in Hogwarts four houses since Snape is a muggle name. I know this is A/U (really, all fanfic is A/U!) but I just thought I'd point that out.

Great effort, please consider getting a beta, though.

Mar