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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your Scorpius. *heartheart*
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! The truth is out. Thank goodness for children...out of the mouth of babes, they say...although I will say, I'm horrified that Harry used such language in Scorpius's presence, but at least he was probably too young to really understand and absorb it, and I'm sure he's heard far worse from Draco. So wow, some of this really is about vanity then, Draco keeps the picture of his perfect Harry in his drawer and heart, but I'm so happy to hear that he's realized that no matter what's happened between them and to Harry's appearance, his heart still is with Harry. Big revelation, now what will he do about it? Poor Harry, having to endure Draco's cruelty. After hearing his rationale for keeping the glamour, I'm less inclined now to blame Harry's martyr syndrome. Harry's starting to sound real grown! Years of loving Draco and being tortured and disfigured probably aged him. I hope Draco heard what he was saying and go after his man. How will he reconcile his prejudice against all that is not perfect with his love for Harry. That will be something of a struggle and I can't wait to see how you have him work through that....he has to work through it, right? Please tell me there's a happy ending : ) GREAT update...I love this story : )
OMG and ROFL@ this line: It was always a conceit of Harry
OMG and ROFL@ this line: It was always a conceit of Harry
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Intense chapter. That was a damned good exit. As for the beginning scene. Although I had felt that Harry's metal dancing was a good thing for him, it is no wonder that he hasn't got closure. He needs to and does force Draco out of his mind completely to concentrate when he's working. And I'm sure he hasn't taken a vacation in awhile.
The next scene, I'll admit I really like how you introduced Draco's point of view this time around. Although he communicated it badly at the end, I can understand Draco being upset at Harry for caring about everyone else, being a hero for the wizarding world, but not doing a "favor" for him. Although I completely disagree with the glamour as a favor, I can understand why Draco would want and cling to hope that a second opinion would change everything.
Oh. And I know it is a bit silly but I like Grishnazk! Maybe I cling to characters that are generally unloved or undergo hardships, but his words to Harry about being bitter about how others treat and see creatures really tugged at my heartstrings. Its even more heartwarming to note that Harry would act like that whether or not he, himself, was an outcast for being so disfigured. Really cool in contrast to Draco's sniping about his distaste for creatures. By the way, what did he mean by "remember the forms."? Sorry. And one other thing: when Draco was happy about hearing about Ginny in the paper, was he happy that Harry had found someone at first [so he could be rid of him] or happy that Ginny is getting married? Or happy about their break-up? I wasn't sure. Not really a big deal, but...
Maybe I shouldn't have, but I found it hilarious when Draco called it an adult "courtesy" by not staring at Harry, since truly the only reason he's not staring isn't for Harry's benefit, but to soothe his own stomach so that he doesn't throw up. Harry values openness. I doubt that he is focusing so much on forgiving Scorpius for his openness, than he is for Draco's disgust. Funnier still when Draco washed his hands after finding that Scorpius touched Harry. ^^ Is his son impure now? ^^ I dunno, but it would have been different had you wrote that he washed Scorpius' hands or something. Although it does same something that Draco didn't get angry at Scorpius for chirping away at truths.
By the way, the small description of Harry's tortue gave me more than just a small shiver. I hope to keep getting these small tidbits, since reading the entire ordeal will be...a bit horryfying.
That last bit was amazing though. Harry putting a glamour on, and then saying his reasons so plainly for leaving ("
The next scene, I'll admit I really like how you introduced Draco's point of view this time around. Although he communicated it badly at the end, I can understand Draco being upset at Harry for caring about everyone else, being a hero for the wizarding world, but not doing a "favor" for him. Although I completely disagree with the glamour as a favor, I can understand why Draco would want and cling to hope that a second opinion would change everything.
Oh. And I know it is a bit silly but I like Grishnazk! Maybe I cling to characters that are generally unloved or undergo hardships, but his words to Harry about being bitter about how others treat and see creatures really tugged at my heartstrings. Its even more heartwarming to note that Harry would act like that whether or not he, himself, was an outcast for being so disfigured. Really cool in contrast to Draco's sniping about his distaste for creatures. By the way, what did he mean by "remember the forms."? Sorry. And one other thing: when Draco was happy about hearing about Ginny in the paper, was he happy that Harry had found someone at first [so he could be rid of him] or happy that Ginny is getting married? Or happy about their break-up? I wasn't sure. Not really a big deal, but...
Maybe I shouldn't have, but I found it hilarious when Draco called it an adult "courtesy" by not staring at Harry, since truly the only reason he's not staring isn't for Harry's benefit, but to soothe his own stomach so that he doesn't throw up. Harry values openness. I doubt that he is focusing so much on forgiving Scorpius for his openness, than he is for Draco's disgust. Funnier still when Draco washed his hands after finding that Scorpius touched Harry. ^^ Is his son impure now? ^^ I dunno, but it would have been different had you wrote that he washed Scorpius' hands or something. Although it does same something that Draco didn't get angry at Scorpius for chirping away at truths.
By the way, the small description of Harry's tortue gave me more than just a small shiver. I hope to keep getting these small tidbits, since reading the entire ordeal will be...a bit horryfying.
That last bit was amazing though. Harry putting a glamour on, and then saying his reasons so plainly for leaving ("
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must admit I adore Scorpius in this chapter. He totally has that little kid 'the whole world revoles around me and my needs' thing going on. Not to mention that brutally complete honesty too. I still feel that Draco needs to be slaped badly.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always: I love your story. I kind of understand Draco, in his case it would be a lie to stay with Harry. He only accepts perfection especially outwardly perfection. Scorpius is so typically child: "I should not be with you, but you look interesting, you are nice, you feed me: I like you" without prejudices. A great story with a fitting title. Keep going!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued and needing more of this delightful tale.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The son is awesome! keep it up and update soon!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fucking bastard!!! I HATE DRACO MALFOY IN THIS STORY! AND I CANT BELIEVE THAT YOU'RE MAKING THIS STORY HARRY/DRACO. This ASSHOLE has to do a lot of groveling to get back in my good books!! SHITFACEsdgafagdfjgoaijdfolajwdfoijasfsdfsdfjaoifghoajasd
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so fucking pissed off.
And please give Harry some fucking backbone!!! He's soo much better than that Malfoy turd. Couldnt you make him have another boyfriend somewhere? show that he's moved on??!?! Its a good story no doubt, otherwise it wouldnt have raised such passion in me. Cant wait for an update so I can bash Dracoturd some more. *stupidblondponce*
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so fucking pissed off.
And please give Harry some fucking backbone!!! He's soo much better than that Malfoy turd. Couldnt you make him have another boyfriend somewhere? show that he's moved on??!?! Its a good story no doubt, otherwise it wouldnt have raised such passion in me. Cant wait for an update so I can bash Dracoturd some more. *stupidblondponce*
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the new chapter. so scorpius knew harry potter already? did draco read him stories of harry's heroic at night? i'm just curious about the one who made harry's being known to the boy. thank you again, author.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story. just one question will harry late got to the muggle world and get plastic surgery after draco accepts him back. If before then would mess up you plot , just idea