rate_review Reviews

That was an awesome story! Great job!

I never cry when reading. Ever. Perhaps I don't allow my mind to conjure up an imaginative image that would make me cry, but I swear I almost did for this.

I admit, when I saw you updated, I was fricken happy. I was like "heck yes!" when you posted another one for this story in a row. So I felt quite cheated [as I forgot the length you detailed for this story] when you said it was the last chapter. But this fricken made me happy.

I think the best bit out of all of it [and so much of it was good] for me was Draco helping Harry with his leg. That was my major problem with Draco from the first chapter, that Harry was in pain, and THAT should have been the first cure persued.

I think it was good that you decided to not revolve this last chapter around Draco's search for a cure, which is what I was expecting. This was beautiful.

Another thing I loved was how you brought the sigil's back in the story and how you described Draco's thoughts on how Harry must form the patterns, not with a former idea of what they would be, but forming them as he makes them and allowing them to just become whatever they will. I thought it was very complimenting to the first scene of Harry and Hermione, and how Hermione wished Harry would strive for the ideal [so he wouldn't get hurt]. It was amazing to follow this all with Harry and Draco learning and growing from their relationship.

I hadn't expected the sigils to react to Draco once hardened. That was really interesting.

I laughed so hard when Harry asked Draco "if he was okay." It should be sad that Harry wouldn't want to consider aloud that it was sexual, but I found Draco's frustration to be hilarious.

I had been worred as I read on that in this chapter the story would end on a note where I wouldn't be sure if Draco would eventually leave Harry after no cure was found, a sort of "hope for the future, you never know" kind of ending, but while I know that this might not be a 'sure' thing, I love that you ended it differently. You left us, appropriately with the present, instead of looking towards the future looming.

This was a beautiful chapter. I absolutely loved it. Gorgeous story. Definitely one of my favorites of yours.

A beautiful ending to an amazing story. I feel depressed now that it's all over, but the feeling kind of mixed with how happy I am at the ending. I'm so proud of Draco. I loved how he really pushed and how he fought his own mind, I loved Harry's strength, I loved Scorpius, I loved Ginny (Yes, the Ginny in this story was awesome!), I loved Ron and Hermione, I loved everything about this story!

And I'm so glad you didn't find a cure for Harry. I wanted him to stay that way, the whole purpose for this story. It's about acceptance. Harry's, Draco's and Scorpius's.

Millions of thanks for writing and sharing this. The last chapter can be added to one of the many celebrations I have now, having just finished my final examination after a full trying and suffering month. XD

Thank you! I bow to your writing skill, Lomonaaeren.

I really like this story and I'm kinda sad to see it end. The ending was reall good though.

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