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for Hephaestus

by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!!!
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Just the summary gets me really excited about this story. I'm really looking forward to the development of this. So Draco is Aphrodite? ^.^ Although I suppose Astoria isn't just a mistress (like Ares) and the Death Eaters aren't exactly Hera. "It was someone more hideous he'd come to see." Jeez. So crazy. I love my Harry so I'm betting I'll get quite annoyed with Draco, but at the same time proud of Harry and how he handles everything. Especially as Draco saw that he was doing Harry a favor by staying with him at first. It makes me sad to think that Draco knows about the pain in Harry's leg, and is repulsed, rather than first trying to find a cure that eases that pain for Harry. Is Ginny okay? Does Teddy exist in this story? I'm not sure what to expect relationship wise, but it will be interesting to see if Harry makes any breakthroughs in Draco's maturity. Wonderful job. You've got me from this first chapter and now I'm completely hooked. The metal-dancing is really interesting in how you described it although I'm not sure I understand its function. Are the patterns just symbols created from the twistings?
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. that's some cold shit here. : ) Draco is at his finest, being an arse. I'm totally cheering for Harry, and of course, hoping that Draco can somehow be redeemed. *hugs plushie Harry*
person SlytherinPrincess19
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww I like this story, I want to read more. ;D
Poor harry though. ;[
I hope things lighten up for him soon.
;D
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor harry, and im kinda of ashamed of how draco reacted
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW...Deep .... I like to read more.
person Dee
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Would you ever consider writing an mpreg. I just think your really good and there are very few writers who can write a truly good mpreg.
person Ladynight
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is so...wow. I can't wait for the next update, nor can I wait for reality to slap draco upside the head.