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made me cry!

Very good. I'ts always rough to have to rethink previous conceptions and prejudices. Draco and Harry didn't think that Draco could get past Harry's deformities; mostly because of Draco's original aversion.

You walked that through to it's conclusion very, very well. It's just too bad that something tragic had to open Draco's eyes that not all beauty is visual, especially when the heart is invested. Great story.

Not the ending I was expecting, but a great ending nonetheless ^_^

Great work

Jan

So clever! So sweet! And I actually understood Draco's thought process! That was fabulous!

A very lovely H/D fic! And for once something down to earth. Love isn't always perfect and easy, sometimes one has to work for it. And I really thought you did this beautifully in this fic!

Cheers!

wow.....great story with a great ending

@ch. 8. OMG!! I love you! There was so much hope in this chapter, I almost cried when Scorpius went into the fire with the Dwarf. So awesome that a child wouldn't have the vanity to chose the utility of his limb over repairing his face! This was just awesome writing. But I don't understand why they can't give it another go for his face...maybe not all of it, but just try? lol. Ah, there goes my vanity talking. I love the pure emotion radiating from Draco in this chapter. I was giggling so hard at Harry pitying the Hogwarts professors who would teach Scorpius and then Draco thinks the same, haha! Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up : )

Awesome ending to a really moving story! I loved the progression of their relationship and their own personal epiphanies that got them there. Draco's insights into why he pushed Harry away really were deep.The whole bit with Draco flirting with Harry was so freaking cute and HOT! By the time they got to it, it felt like exhaling. LOL@Scorpius finding them in bed together and Ginny sending Doxies. hehe. Once again, you've written a story that really is beautiful and full of the real complexities of relationships and human nature. Thanks once again for brilliant story : )

I am sooo going to miss this!!! One day you just have to revisit this world again!!!

thank you very much for sharing this brilliant piece of art with us. it ended very naturally; like scorpius intruding to show his fathers his new toy. like they're too nervous for their second first time, they forgot to set up silencing charms. a first "normal" morning to mark the beginning of more normal mornings (and more fulfilling nights) for the happy little family. Lomonaaeren, thanks many lots to you we got to read Hephaestus! much, much so!