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The fact that Hermione has allowed him into her home says volumes to me. She's revealing nothing in words, but she's letting him in nonetheless and wow@Ron and Hermione's open marriage, that's certainly interesting. I love how much it caught Draco off guard as well, and how he's learning about her through observation and just how much he really doesn't know about her. I loved Ron's response to the situation and warning to Draco. Heh. How humiliating! What a total mind f*ck this whole situation is for him, but he likes it more than he's letting on. I wonder if Ron is seeing someone on the side as well, well, it wouldn't be on the side, would it? I love the idea of Draco cleaning the Muggle way. Interesting conversation between the two...I loved his response to her asking for his wand. There's a bit of the old Draco in there yet...and the way she shut him down after he carelessly gave his approval was funny...Hermione's treatment is cold, then lukewarm and then cold again, but she is warming up a bit. The fact that the one thing that stayed with him after he left was her backhanding him is just awesome in its implications in terms of Draco's submission and feelings about their 'relationship'. I LOVE this Emily...thank you again.

hehehehe. yes, she touched you.

sick, depraved, interesting, eyebrow raising shit, this fic keeps getting better and better.

I feel bad for Draco. I can't help that I do... From where this is going I shouldn't hope for a decent happy ending between the two; should I ??? Other than that your story is good and very intense !!!

damn you!!!

Uh . . this is amazing. I'm just gonna let you know that. You have to continue writing this. It's kinda like crack. It makes me want you to write a story for me. Yeah. I think you should. Anything you want.

Amazing

Oh,I see steps, baby steps but steps nonetheless, in the right? direction! Did she hit him with a rolled up piece of parchment like a dog???? If yes, i'm ROFL! and the very high heel near his parts, priceless! I adore how hes making his own rituals because she won't/doesn't. Genius all around!

this shit had me speechless, interesting, fucking interesting, I would have never thought up something so twisted, essential, depraved, invigorating, so freeing, and I get the feeling u haven't even begun to tap into those adjectives yet. It has me on edge, u have update soon, keep up the great work. MORE!!!!!

I'm so glad she's not warming up! AFF is an old-fashioned place in terms of gender roles, good job having the woman be admirable and powerful and, lets face it, kind of a dick - while the guy is subservient. Awesome.

Well, I just found this story...I somehow missed the posting of the first two chapters and i must say...

I want to read more!!! There is an underlying feeling of tension in this story...not just sexual, but in their behavior towards one another. I can't wait to see where this story leads!!

Well Done!!!

Lady B*