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Terrific, please update soon.

I'm loving it! It's ooc but i don't really care about it, i love Lucius and Severus and if they are well written cannon is not important! It's a fun story and she is going to give him a hard time isn't she?

cute so far... one problem.
"Severus and Draco looked over at Lucius who was still watching her walk away, his eyes roaming her person.

"Lucius, you are doomed,

Chapter 5: I

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Lucius can take me home and ravish me any time he wants, LOL. Poor guy, if Hermione refeuses to change that rule about not dating co-workers, he's in for rough time of it!

And so it begins indeed!

He's def abit more than smitten with her! And she's having somethoughts too!

Can't wait for more!!

Chapter 4: I never worked well at a desk either. I like to spread out with papers on a sofa so Hermione

So good. It seems that Lucius is going to have his work cut out for him if Hermione is a firm believer in not dating a coworker. I can't wait! lol

Chapter 3: This chapter gives a good picture of Hermione