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Sexual tension. Don't you just love it? lol

Oh, I never mind Lucius trying to appeal to Hermione. All of my stories have him doing just that. He may be arrogant, status-conscious, and manipulative, but he knows a good thing when he sees it. Lucius being Lucius, he wants it and goes about getting it

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Business, my arse!

Is ANYONE else going to turn up to annoy Lucius?! lol!

Hahahaha! Arse of marble! lol! *sing-song-voice* Ron's got a boyfriend, Ron's got a boyfriend...

"Tainted smoke"... made from a certain plant perhaps? Next she'll be growing particularly magic mushrooms!

Oh dear... he thinks he's hearing things... or not.

DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMED! DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMED lol.

Poor sod, working for the blooming government. lol.

i love it.

Excellent story so far... I wish Hermione would own up to the fact that there's an attraction there. Please update soon! This story is so intruiging.

Oh he's so doomed lol!
And seems like she's not entirely immune when it comes to him eighter. I mean, who would be???

I'm sure he will help her out with the not being a crone before finding a man hehe.

I really did enjoy this chapter and I look forward to the next one!

I just love how bad Lucius has it for Hermoine. Poor sucker! This story is very sweet and I'm excited to see what happens. Draco really does need a smack to the head once in a while. I'd love to see Hermoine do it too.

It's a very enjoyable read. Thanks for writing it.

Is this a re-write of another fic? Or am I just getting a d

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Heck, if she's got a mantelpiece, does that mean she has her own fire - and thus her own personal connection to the floo network? Although, the head of a department would probably need their own connection.

Why does the Ministry of Magic have a board of Governors? I thought it was only schools that had them! The ministry isn't a school - I think you've got your wires crossed.

The British Government at number 10 has levels of "importance" and power: you've got the Prime Minister at the top; the the Departmental ministers (also called secretaries of state); then the ministers of state - who aren't secretaries of state (they work for the departmental ministers - and they generally have specific jobs to do and their own titles), and then there's the junior ministers (who are parliamentary secretaries)...

Current British list: http://www.parliament.uk/directories/directories/hmg.cfm

Above in English (that will make sense even to us Brits) http://www.britannia.com/gov/gov11.html

(Don't we complicate matters over here? lol!)

So, I think Hermione is a Departmental minister. That would put her under Kingsley, but above everyone else. So, Lucius is a 'Governor' (which doesn't exist in British politics); is he in the same boat as Hermione - a departmental minister? Or is he a high ranking Minister of state? I can't see Lucius working UNDER anyone he didn't have to. I think your use of the term 'Governor' is a bit Yank for the situation.

Anyway... back to the fic.

Hasn't Lucius got nice manners when he's not trying to kill her! lol!

Can I hug Harry too? I like hugs.

Can I make a request? New speaker, new line, with a line inbetween? I know you're trying to create paragraphs of conversation (and changing paragraph as the topic changes) - but it clumps it all together too much. Split the dialogue up with a line between each new speaker, it makes it easier to follow a conversation.

So, Molly sets the twins on people who don't turn up for tea? lol! I don't think I'd argue with her when she sends Fred and George after you!

RDD? What's the RDD? You can't throw an acronym at us and not tell us what it is in long hand, duckie. RDD could mean anything.

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