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for Refashioning Affection

by SarahRae

person TashaRose
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you are able to find the time to finish this one. {Smiles}
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you don't update soon,I'm going to cry.I LOVE the style of writting.You have me on the edge of my seat!
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 13: Oh dear. And Lucius and Hermione were looking so good together. Apparently there is another wrinkle in Hermione
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 14: Lucius likes his tea the same way I do. I knew we were meant to be together LOL.

Ah, the insecure control freak type. And Hermione fell for it. That type is insidious and she was very young and inexperienced. How sad. I can
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 15: This venture into demon-hunting sounds interesting. I
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 16: How can Hermione dither about a man who is willing to tie her up at her command and provide the sexperience she asks? Maybe someday he will be able to give her what he wants from his drawer. She
person lilashannah
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far,I can't wait for the next chappy.Lucius's softer side is kind of nice.To see him so unsure of himself make him seem human.
person Miss Jo1
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a phenomenal story so far. I really like the way you fashion the close ties Lucius and Hermione have with their friends. There are a number of different variables at play; do you just write as you go or do you plan the entire story out first? I've tried both, and am not sure which I prefer.

I am really looking forward to reading more as you are able to post it.

Regards,

JO
person kittycat30
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was having trouble breathing at the beginning! Lucky girl! A promise ring seems like a good start... BUT, a scared Hermione is never good. Hopefully, Lucius is patient. Although, a good yelling match/fight always lead to great make-up sex - right? Yum!!!
person Voracious reader
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the terrors of love! A friend of mine compared it to being blindfolded and leaping off a cliff while hoping someone you trusted had placed a parachute on you. Hermione doesn't have to worry aobut that, though--Lucius wouldn't let her out of bed in that blindfold! Love the chapter.