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Great update. It gave me a bit of chuckle how Hermione couldn't be closer to the truth about Lucius. lol I can't wait for more!

I just can't picture Lucius wrapped in a Navajo blanket, LOL, but I'd love to try! This is good and I like the way you've set the scene. And yes, some of us were also up quite late waiting for the final results. Hopefully, we got it right this time, damn it.

I'm relatively new to this ship, but even so you're idea seems very original! I love that Ron isn't a jerk and didn't hurt her or anything. I can't wait for more!

Chapter 2: Hermione has Harry back in her life now that she's in London. That's a good thing for both of them, working in the Ministry. It appears that Lucius has a bit of a thing for Miss Hermione. And Hermione seems not entirely immune to the tall, elegant wizard either. (Well, who would be?)

It's good that Narcissa and Lucius are divorced. It's always sad when authors kill her off. That has to affect Draco and muddies the plot, making the author have to deal with that (although very often they don't). It sounds like Draco knows his father has a yen for Hermione and isn't too concerned about it. That's quite adult of him.

So begins Lucius' pursuit of sweet, innocent Hermione. What a lucky young woman.

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I'll kick in with a few corrections, then...
"to notice the tall, blacked haired " - black-haired
"The are copies of all you reports" - THEY are copies of all YOUR...
"mess.

Nice piece of work! I'm curious to where this is going to! :) Update regularly!

Nice chapter.

This has a very nice flow in it, not to rushed and not to slow eighter. It's just right I think.

If she only knew what lay ahead of her now, already has a secret admirer and he's going to persue her. I think she will be pleasantly surprised since it seems she's not carrying any grudges or?

Please write more soon!

Well i love the story! :) you are doing a marlvious job! i am going to look forward to reading the chapter of this story! i am hoping that you have lots planned for this story for i love long stroies so dont rush anything! :) i will be watching for the next chapter!

Another excellent chapter, I await the next chapter with baited breath. I loved the 'great ferret father' a wonderfully funny phrase.

Love it! I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts when Lucius inevitably starts coming round. lol

nice! :D update soon!