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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story and my favorite pair! Yay! I wasn't crazy about the slash, though.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I do like this version better!
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. I would love to see more of this pair. I tought that Ron was not really meant for her and I was dissappointed that Remuss and Sirius were killed. I would also love to see more of her and Remus. You write very well. I hope you post more stories like this one soon.
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really excited about your stories. You are a promising writer. And I love that you don't leave us hanging for too long.
I might suggest more details in your fics. They need more meat. More characteristics and adjectives, just so the readers can really start to relate to your FF characters. And more details that relate to the plot.
I can't wait to read this, and more of your works. Please continue to write...
All the best,
Elaine
I might suggest more details in your fics. They need more meat. More characteristics and adjectives, just so the readers can really start to relate to your FF characters. And more details that relate to the plot.
I can't wait to read this, and more of your works. Please continue to write...
All the best,
Elaine
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just reread all the chapters and I have one question. Why was Hermione trying so hard to get Ron to notice their anniversary if she was going to break it off with him anyway? I am patiently waiting for more and I am THRILLED to see that Remus is getting his own story soon. Nice switch up for all the characters and their relationships it does keep things fresh. Well I'm off to read all of your fics now. I am finding it hard to find quality stories lately. Well done!!!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow for something that turned out so sexy it ended up sweet. Can't wait for the next story. Well done!!!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet, and I thought the "Hermione turning into a puff of smoke and going inside Sirius" thing was really cool! Very original, and I loved Harry/Remus.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loviing this story!! It wasn't a one shot, was it?
I liked how you put everyone against Ron, I just hate him being with Hermione!
I liked how you put everyone against Ron, I just hate him being with Hermione!
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never read the first version of this story however I love it. I am a little disappointed that you made Remus gay as he is one of the characters that I like Hermione paired with. That aside I like the ship. sthere aren't enough Hermione and Serious or Hermione and Remus. I thank you for updating so much it is a pet peeve when I love a story and they never get updated. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!