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for Why you?

by Jadeaffection

person kazfeist
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice third chapter. He's taking her to the Infirmary, I presume. Are you going to have some sort of wizarding DNA kit? Just wondering. :D
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic couple of chapters!!! They need to be LOOOOOOOONGER and MORE of them!!! Keep it up!! xxx
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A cookie too! Awesome! LOL Feeling the luv. ;) Now on to the good stuff.

What in the name of Merlin
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll trade you a review for another update. :-) I like the story so far. I look forward to more explanation of who they are now, what happened that he owes her (was it saving his life in the war?), and who the attacker was. And, I can't wait to see how you bring these two together. lol Thanks! HG4eva
person kazfeist
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter. Enjoyed the cliffhanger. I assume she stood up for him at Grimmauld, when he surrendered? Sad that in your story, Narcissa had to die. I always like stories where she and Hermione bond. Hopefully, we'll find out who tried to hurt our Head Girl. My money's on Ron, but it would be nice for it to be someone unusual....from Hufflepuff, maybe. Keep up the good work. :D
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like it so far. Please continue. :)
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I like it.
Kind of short, but it definitely has potential.
:)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Kay89
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey pretty good. Keep writing when u get the chance!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story. i like that draco is the one that found her and he doesn't seem to occ so it's great. I hope you update really really soon.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning. Update soon!

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