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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really wish you had continued with this one; it had such possibilities! Ah well.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, REALLY hope you don't abandon this. I keep checking for updates and I'm always so sad when it doesn't happen. There are so many things you could do with this, and I'm just waiting to see where you take it.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like to have read more of her misslead desire for Ron plaing out in her head; how she is REALLY feeling about what is happening to her. I know this story isn't supposed to be long... besides that it was a good story.
Love ya,
H1PPO
Love ya,
H1PPO
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, i forgot to tell you that this has a lot of heat packed in a short fire. I WANT TO GET BURNED BABY! Give me more!!
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story line, and this chapter was well written. Gawd I love Snape/Hermione and this made me want to drool. I hope you continue on with it, it could make a nice full length fic.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Very Hot
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol the only sensible thing to do .. leave ron in the dust!
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very good beginning, I look forward to more!