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by knj4k4

schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You Write Well, but should consider getting a beta.
you have several spelling mistakes.

Otherwise, looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far, I can't wait to see what Dumbles is up nto in your story.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story but what about Harry's and Draco friends, alos what about Sirus and Remus