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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter..a bit short. how long can he leave his people?
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like your story but a few points
1) get a beta reader
1) get a beta reader
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it. i cann't wait until the next chapter to see happens.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and what a place to stop... I can't wait to see how they handel Harry. Please continue soon.
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol...only on chappy 2 right now but i will keep commenting till i get to chappy 8 and hence forth as u update the story.
chappy 2 was wow...awesome!! lol, go snape >.> XD poor harry i hope he gets to kick some headmaster butty by the end of this. if not then maybe dumbledore will have angered Kaiden enough to kill him. ok im off to read more..lol
chappy 2 was wow...awesome!! lol, go snape >.> XD poor harry i hope he gets to kick some headmaster butty by the end of this. if not then maybe dumbledore will have angered Kaiden enough to kill him. ok im off to read more..lol
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm, nice. i love the pace ur going at but if you think u shud slow down do as u wish but please dont stop updating this is too fab. update soon