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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting and intriguing start to a new story! I liked that this is a story where Hermione and Severus already are married, and that they have, if not a conventinal marriage, they do have friendship and respect and they can build a whole lot of good on such a fondation:-) I also found it refreshing that this time Ron is the good friend while Harry obviously has issues he needs to deal with. I am most intrigued to find out why Hermione had to kill Remus.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Makes me looking forward whats all behind.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm you have me intrigued. I wonder why she killed Remus...
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you picked my curiosity! :) It seems that it'll be a very interesting story; keep going!
I will wait impatiently for next chapters and read them with all my attention.
Best regards,
Me ;-)
I will wait impatiently for next chapters and read them with all my attention.
Best regards,
Me ;-)
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this looks interesting.
I want to know what those questions are :o)
Please update soon!
I want to know what those questions are :o)
Please update soon!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the pace of this story. It's like you click your fingers and boom, there's a bit...click, another bit. It's very exciting! Looking forward to more :)
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely story! VERY intresting. i cant wait to read more of it
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh wow, that was a quick update!
This is interesting. What the binding between Harry and Hermione? And why is Harry being so mean to her when when obviously everyone around him keeps telling him that its not her fault she had to kill Remus? Coming to that, what did he do? Was it that he tried to attack her because he changed sides?
Why can't Snape tell Harry, since he knows everything? Is it because he promised her that he wouldn't tell Harry?
Alright, looking forward to the next one!
This is interesting. What the binding between Harry and Hermione? And why is Harry being so mean to her when when obviously everyone around him keeps telling him that its not her fault she had to kill Remus? Coming to that, what did he do? Was it that he tried to attack her because he changed sides?
Why can't Snape tell Harry, since he knows everything? Is it because he promised her that he wouldn't tell Harry?
Alright, looking forward to the next one!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found your story today, started reading, and could not wait until the next chapters! So thanks for posting them!
Your story has some proofing issues...but nothing major...and nothing that I do not do with my own stories!
What I am really enjoying is the reverse story line, if you will. Starting with Severus and Hermione together, and then slowly letting the reader know how it got to that point. Brilliant! I am also enjoy how this is starting to feel like a quest. No one is giving Harry the answers all at once, although I am sure that any of them could. To be sure that it will sink in for him, Harry is being sent on a quest, receiving little pieces of the bigger puzzle...one at a time. Please, keep posting and I will keep reading!
Your story has some proofing issues...but nothing major...and nothing that I do not do with my own stories!
What I am really enjoying is the reverse story line, if you will. Starting with Severus and Hermione together, and then slowly letting the reader know how it got to that point. Brilliant! I am also enjoy how this is starting to feel like a quest. No one is giving Harry the answers all at once, although I am sure that any of them could. To be sure that it will sink in for him, Harry is being sent on a quest, receiving little pieces of the bigger puzzle...one at a time. Please, keep posting and I will keep reading!