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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A little less Gwen in this chapter than I like :P However, I know there are other characters in the story who are important, too.
Harry and Ginny's fight/argument really flashed by. I guess the two of them are pretty emotional people and their moods have been known to change quickly. The sex caught me off guard. It's been awhile since i've read earlier chapters, but I think that's the first time anything so explicit's been written (at least recently). It's not what I read this for, but I suppose it's appropriate for Harry and Ginny.
I hadn't realized it before, but I think I'm interested in hearing a bit more from Ron, too. He's been fairly quiet so far and he seems like he's got something new to say about all this.
Keep up the good work!
Harry and Ginny's fight/argument really flashed by. I guess the two of them are pretty emotional people and their moods have been known to change quickly. The sex caught me off guard. It's been awhile since i've read earlier chapters, but I think that's the first time anything so explicit's been written (at least recently). It's not what I read this for, but I suppose it's appropriate for Harry and Ginny.
I hadn't realized it before, but I think I'm interested in hearing a bit more from Ron, too. He's been fairly quiet so far and he seems like he's got something new to say about all this.
Keep up the good work!
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. I think the story line is fresh and the addition of new characters well thought out. Thank you for a great read!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I remember the first couple chapters of this, and I'm so glad you updated. I had to particularly review this chapter. I love how you've brought Gwen to the Quidditch World Cup. I hope she can find her baby later in life....wonder if it was Goyle Sr. who did the dirty deed for her? You've done a wonderful job in drawing Gwen's character, and I can't wait to see if Tonks comes back in this story, as she died in canon. Keep up the good work! :D
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've gotten to the end of the chapters that are up. I can't wait to see how Harry and Ron will handle Gwen's situation. Great job, so far. :D
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice interactions between LPD and the Aurors. The chief's attitude, though, makes me curious how many other joint cases with the Ministry he's dealt with. It's probably not important to the current story, but it perked my interest.
Gwen's flashbacks sound like they could exacerbate things! Should be interesting.
Gwen's flashbacks sound like they could exacerbate things! Should be interesting.
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice.
But.....You might need to put a disclaimer on Gwen Cooper as being from Torchwood....even if she's pre-torchwood...I dont think that you can brush it off as coincidence of the name.and occupation.....
But.....You might need to put a disclaimer on Gwen Cooper as being from Torchwood....even if she's pre-torchwood...I dont think that you can brush it off as coincidence of the name.and occupation.....
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Genial as
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, i like
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's enough in his description that I get the feeling Gregory will definitely show back up...if not perhaps already exist in the story (It's been awhile since I've read the books...his description and name sound familiar)?
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I review a story here, but I really really liked it. I hope that you update often and that you will let us know were Hermione is.
En resumen, Me encanto tu historia, pobre Draco.
En resumen, Me encanto tu historia, pobre Draco.