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for Little Red Hen

by AislingSiobhan

person Gena
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was brillant i thought at first his aunt WAS GOING to be evil and make him little red ridding hood at a young age or something
person Juana13
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha so cute, although it would've been sexy to see how fenir would've reacted to a red riding hood harry : )
loved this! it was funny at the end
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was good. Definitly unexpected. I am going to link this in my blog in the coming week. I will review again with the link when I post it in my blog. Peace.
person shadygrl
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good basis for a longer story!
person kati-chan
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao that was hilarious good job. Quick note though -- Britain actually consists of: Scotland, England and Wales. I often hear on American TV people referring to Britain and the UK and England as all the same thing but they're not. The Uk is short for the United Kingdom of Great Britain (Scotland, England and Wales) and Northern Ireland. England is only one constituent state of Britain. So, umm... there you have it. You didn't need to say, "Britain, Scotland and Wales." ^_^
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story...my only question is how would harry be 17 in the yr 1987 if he was one yr old in 1981?
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, poor Fenrir. Your story's actually a pretty good basis for a longer plot, really. One thing I noticed, though - 'Britain, Scotland and Wales'. Scotland and Wales are a part of Britain - Great Britain is: England, Northen Ireland, Scotland and Wales. Great story!
person Coobs
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol loved it, simple, but genious!!
person poohbear74
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a cute story!
person kunitsu
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahaha I love how Harry mixed up those characters. And I also love the flow of the story it was quick but it wasnt too quick to make it seem like you rushed it