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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this threesome!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHHHH so loving this story. Can't wait to see what happens when Harry appears in public with Sev, Luc and Draco. They actually need a shopping day and a trip to Gringots. That would really be cool. But Harry needs a little more self confidence before he goes. I wonder if the three of them can do that. Looking forward to an update.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
La la la la... I'm excited! Interesting concept... First five chapters are pretty well written except everyone seems out of character. It doesn't really matter because it's an AU, but I thought I'd just mention that, although I do like the way you've kind of portrayed Draco. The relationship between Snape and Malfoy is also interesting too, although the way they speak and their mannerisms are different than canon... It's still good and I would come back again to read more.
Thanks!
-smelly
Thanks!
-smelly
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Thanks for writing it.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great story and I would like to see more.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I started reading it when you were writing on Fanfiction.net and was sad to see that it had not been updated more. Are you going to be using this site now? I just can't wait to see the story continued. If you have an e-mail list for updates could you please add me? Wonderful work!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, there are not enough good LM/SS/HP fanfics. I can't wait to read what happens next. ^_^
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!