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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
--Um, I guess I must have missed the bit where we got the juicy, delicious details of that threesome.....I feel cheated! LOL! I am hoping to see more along this same vein. Good start, for sure.
--Um, I guess I must have missed the bit where we got the juicy, delicious details of that threesome.....I feel cheated! LOL! I am hoping to see more along this same vein. Good start, for sure.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would first like to thank you for the lovely review you left me in the DDM/HG halloween challenge fic. This story was good however i would like to see you put more content/ filler into it. The Plot was wonderful, along with good spelling. It just moved so quickly. Keep up the good work, i hope to see more from you soon.
~Anya
~Anya
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I do think everything went very fast, and suddenly they were getting married, I was under the impression that something yet had to happen., maybe because there was no real conflict?
It is a nice piece of fiction though and I enjoyed reading it!
It is a nice piece of fiction though and I enjoyed reading it!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just read all 3 of you stories so far and I want to say that I really like the. I'm finally working on a few myself and it's a bit scary to put them up. So I know how you feel and I glad you did. Thanks!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione at full throttle, I'm interested to see where this goes. I hope you continue.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! It opened at full speed! Awesome LMAO you are doing great hon, keep it up!!!
Happy Writing!
S_G
Happy Writing!
S_G
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story.. It has soo much potential! I can't wait to read more!
I'm sure Lucius will make her forget! Right???
I'm sure Lucius will make her forget! Right???
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist., I like the way you write, it reads easily., It is a bit OoC though, but I guess whether this is positive or negative I do not know yet! :) I'd love to read more
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a bit short, but I liked it very much. Longer chapters might have given you more opportunity to explore the characters and their interactions a bit more. I especially liked the idea of Harry's former lover constantly popping up and causing disruptions--That could have been a great running gag! The changing room in Malfoy Manor was a very sweet, romantic touch.