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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok fluff but this chapter made me smile - perfect Thank you
person kunitsu
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that ending was just so sweet. I guess Charlie is still afraid of meeting his family, ah well all the better
person Leentjef
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter keep up the fanbtasic work and post soon
and happy new year, that all you wishes may come true
bye bye
person jadedragon
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally... it was pure torture to keep those two seperated...

I am sure that Idiot Charlie is with some other lover.

I know Harry is not going to do anything to risk losing Sev again.
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeeee* omg omg omg chapter 20!!! the begining of a lovely... sex life!! i mean scene!! i mean life! ... *ahem*
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
they are together again, yay!

Another great chapter!
person Nikte
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Al last together, I
person xaraxn
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just finished all of your chapters straight through...no breaks...it rocked but i must meet lucy! update please
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you had a happy new year!

Another get set of chapters!
person Yulin
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Too much dailog, hardly any description of the character's surroundings. No idea what they're seeing, smelling, etc. Also, have no idea what the characters are feeling, there's really not much depth to them at all.