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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was just great and I didnt expect that Draco would like Goerge
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter!!!!!!!! hope you update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap. What a wonderful chapter but such a sad last line. Loved it though.
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww yay~! harry didn't make the same mistake!! xD And that seems so fitting for the bas*cough* charlie... xD YAY!!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i also really like your story. there are many interesting ideas, and harry's despair is very touching. your idea of snape with kohl rimmed eyes was nice - a hint of lawrence of arabia - and sexy.
but the dialogues tend to be a bit wooden. no offense - but is there a beta reader? i noticed some typos, grammatical mistakes ... little things really and easy to correct, but uncorrected they hinder the flow of the story a bit, and that's a pity.
thank you for writing so much and updating!
but the dialogues tend to be a bit wooden. no offense - but is there a beta reader? i noticed some typos, grammatical mistakes ... little things really and easy to correct, but uncorrected they hinder the flow of the story a bit, and that's a pity.
thank you for writing so much and updating!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love so many things about this story.
I love how Harry came to Severus' rescue.
I love how they come together.
I love how Severus is slowly getting his old self back.
I love how Charlie got his come-uppance.
But, mostly, I love how Severus is becoming snarky again. The little comments he says are great.
Keep it up. I feel the end coming. But i'm loving it just the same.
I love how Harry came to Severus' rescue.
I love how they come together.
I love how Severus is slowly getting his old self back.
I love how Charlie got his come-uppance.
But, mostly, I love how Severus is becoming snarky again. The little comments he says are great.
Keep it up. I feel the end coming. But i'm loving it just the same.
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cool spell....esclavitud....slavitude scrambled right? why is there a c in it?
love the fic!
love the fic!
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wait (let me clean my tears) k I'm done, that was a really beautiful chapter. Keep them coming I'm hook on this story and I feel that your not writing fast enough for us, but even if your not writing fast enough we are still going to wait until you have a change and post.....so keep them coming.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter keep up the graet work and post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
bye bye
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At least Charlie got what was coming to him although I am curious where he was. I am glad though that Rasha and the Weasleys worked it out