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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person poohbear74
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and my email address is poohnation74@yahoo.com please can you write to about your updates and no you are right on with the story!
person thegrimreaper
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry finds out how to get Snape's old self back...
person kunitsu
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I am really getting curious as to who Harrys lover is. I find it truly sweet that Harrys is trying his best for Severus, I just hope what he is doing isnt harming Severus. I do wonder if the old Severus will ever come back.
person mls1971
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!! can't wait to read more of it!!!!
person cravedom
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Having a slave is more complicated than one would think. After a while it would seem the owner has to work harder than the slave, well provinding the owner cares for the slave. Is good that Harry has Kreacher to help, there is no telling what would happen otherwise.
person prima
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it, update soon!
i wanna know who is harry's lover.
person Zen
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your writing style.
Please continue post haste.
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schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great begining. I am curious about who Harry's mystery lover is and why he is gone so much of the time. Can't wait for the next update.
person nairobidawn
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning. One question though: Does Severus remember his life before? Or has the spell blocked that out?
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, it's certainly original and quite well written. I do feel sorry for Snape though, lol. Look forward to more.