rate_review Reviews

First of all, wonderful chapter. Harry is changing slowly to adapt to Severus' needs and you're doing a great job of doing that.

I do have a question though. It may be a bit personal so please feel free not to respond. Why are you not showing details of the slash scenes? Is it a personal preference or do you not enjoy writing them? I ask this not as an insult at all but because I feel it would enhance a very good story.

I was very glad to see that you had updated so soon. Your story is going brilliantly. I believe I gave my email address but here it is again- padme82@yahoo.com

Things are going well for Severus and Harry in a way. Oooooooh we finally get to meet the boyfriend in the next chapter, I wonder how he will react to Severus

I am anxiously awaiting more. I too am wondering if Severus still remembers what he was like before he became a slave and what will happen once a cure is hopefully found.

I think the cure could bring out a whole bunch of new issues for Severus and will be ever be like he was before this happened.

I am liking the fact that Harry is starting to like being Severus master, its hot :D
I was a bit confused as to why Ron acted that way in front of Harry and Severus

ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!

Clever and kind punishment and a wonderful gift. Will Harry be able to bring Snape's old himself back? Slave or not slave, that's not as much the point, but I'd love to get Severus' spirit back. I loved the chess game!

I love this story. Thanks for the update but I have a request please. Could you go into further description on their sexual encounters. Your capture their chemistry so well, it's a shame to skip over such a key factor in their relationship.

more, more, more.... just love it

This is THOROUGHLY twisted! You seem to understand the master/slave mentality very well. It makes me wonder where you got your information ...

If you don't have any ideas on how to lift the curse, I have a few, but I'm not going to leave them in a review.

Hi there. What a very interesting concept. Slave!fic is something that's been done time and time again in HP Fandom but you truly have something very original here. Usually there's not 'mind control' when there's a slave fic, meaning usually the slave is still the old person. Not so much here. Poor Snape isn't even a shadow of himself.

Also, I love how you have Harry being affected by the curse too, only we're not sure how far that will go. Very interesting.

As for mistakes, there are a few but not bad ones. If you'd like, I'd be willing to beta your story.

If you'd like to discuss that or reply to my review my email is padme82@yahoo.com. If you have an update list, please add me.

Happy writing and I hope I hear from you.

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