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*Slaughters Charlie* That useless no good SOB!!!!!!!!!!!! How dare he!


Love this story. *Wipes away tears*

thank you, author. i love this story. i'll be waiting for the next chapter. thank you again.

Keep going! I'm reading every chapter as soon as it comes out. You're doing a great job with the chapters and the story. I find slave fics some of the most difficult to read; when they're done badly, they're just horrible; yours is very good in an undersated manner that is unusual and rather appealing. Thanks for the story.

That was supposed to read "under-sTated," not "under-sated," which might have been a Freudian slip as both are true to this point, never mind that the second is not a real word.

So far I really like this story and I hope to read the next chapter real soon.

Well that was unexpected, Charlie being Harrys lover and acting that way. Although I did get the feeling that Harrys lover would want to abuse Severus but not if it was a Weasley. I am glad that Harry didnt let Charlie harm Severus since I am sure that it would have removed all the progress that Harry has made with Severus

Another excellent chapter and once again thank you for the speedy updates. I laughed a bit when I saw your author's notes. Yes, I suppose we readers can be very slash-hungry.

I enjoyed your Snape in this chapter; how he's regaining a bit more of his personality. Not only is this good for the plot but also for the story and its readers. Snape's character is so very complex, exploring his submissive side (even if a slave fic) is always interesting.

And excellent job of having Harry still be in love with someone and not able to 'make love' to Snape. This way the relationship doesn't move to fast. Adds a layer of reality. Well, except for the whole 'magic' thing.

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Oh, Harry, you moron! The way to the hell is plastered with good intentions.

Ahhh the image of snape on his knees begging for release.... please write more soon...

loved it!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!111