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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so soon. I think the story so far is really good. Please keep up the good work!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Harry for kicking Charlie out. And for taking care of Severus.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story. Charlie is an ass. It so clear that he doen't love Harry and is only using him. he hasn't seen his lover in months and the first thing he wants to do is play with a sex slave. come on what a git. I like how story is going so far. I like how you made Charlie so ooc. when I was reading this a thought Draco was his lover. You really shocked me with Charile as the lover. I hope there are more interesting twist to come. please update soon.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The twist of Charlie being his "lover" was fascinating. I'm ... well, I don't know. I like that Harry stood up for Severus, but I really wish he would stand up for himself, or at least learn that that is what he really did. It's fairly obvious that the relationship between them is abusive, at least emotionally... Thanks!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perfectly !!!
That you do all PERFECTLY !!!
I want continuation!!!
That you do all PERFECTLY !!!
I want continuation!!!
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh! Poor Sev. I don't think I'd like this at all... sure Harry's an amazing guy.. it'd be weird i think. Anyways, this was really good, can't wait to read more :D
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it but you made me hate Charlie for this story and how could he do that to Snape!
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Harry would let Charlie humiliate Severus like that, just to make him stay! He said no way to late. I kinda lost my respect for Harry here.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my heart loves this story, and this chapter is positively wonderful. i didn't expect it to be charlie it was a nice surprise.