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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person mls1971
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story :) Some of the chapters and scenes seem a little short though at times, but the story is interesting and I love how the characters are constantly evolving. Great job!
person kunitsu
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was kinky and I like kinky.
person poohbear74
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is a bad boy! another great chapter!
person padme82
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter. I want you to know that this is the only WIP that I check to see if there's an update everyday. Kudos. And your relationship is developing very well with Snape and Harry. And yes, your slash scenes are getting hotter. Excellent work, dear.
person Bones
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
person shadow
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww harry he's so cute and falling in love....umm has harry forgotten bout the whole pregnancy thing?

update soon!!!!!
person kunitsu
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about not being clear on my last review.

The small progress that Severus has made is making me smile. I am glad that the people who are close to Severus still treat him the same as much as possible. looking forward to more of this story
person cravedom
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I had forgotten Snape was naked until Minerva called. Is Severus brewing naked? Lets hope he does not burn anything important ;p
It crazy all the things owning Severus entails. I would say that is like a form of evil parenthood, not that Harry is evil but the curse is. Is Severus able to feel loved? Because he trully is loved and admired.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, another good chapter. I can never find any spelling errors in other people's stories. Must have very good beta's. Anyways, can't wait to read more. :D