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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person cravedom
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Harry is sulking.

Is Severus able to have talk to anybody about his personal feeling for Harry and his betrayal? Is he even able to see it as such? I noticed he did begged Harry not to give him away; was he stating a preference or just trying to be a good slave?

OMG, I forgot Severus can get pregnant! What if Ron wants him to carry his baby?
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so painful to read!! Don't tell me Severus is going to carry Ron's child. That'll make me so sad! Heck, I'm sad now! Poor Harry... True he was an idiot with Charlie, but Charlie was an ass and Harry has a love complex. Awwww....
person mls1971
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
person HarryVik
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh i know harry was an ass, but please make it stop already!!! We get it, He Get it and so.... can we please move on!!!
person poohbear74
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another Great chapter!
person luna love
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure I can get past Ron having sex with Severus, even offscreen. Harry is very OOC
person hotary
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah.... nice, I understand, somehow Harry need to teach a lesson about losing love one, hope you can update every two days, Just hoping...
thanks
person kunitsu
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry I guess the house elves still hasnt forgiven him, damn Charlie fro ruining a good thing for Harry. Cant wait for the rest :D
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not gonna lie to you, the more I read your story the sadder it makes me. :(
I feel so bad for Severus and for Harry. Keep writing, I want to know how it will end.
person poohbear74
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great set of chapters!

I hope harry gets snape back!