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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person kunitsu
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just so sweet it made me go awwwwwww, I love it
person veracityrulesUK
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the update! We're getting there slowly but surely. Brilliantly written as usual.
person poohbear74
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story!, I hope they get back together!
person Leentjef
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very very very good chapter
i really really like hit
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person thegrimreaper
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a sneaking suspicion that Ronald and Hermione don't give a damn about Severus. Maybe they aare trying to get him attached to Ronald and knock him up? Please, NO!
person Korny
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really love this story. but I have one request: Make a happy Ending for Sev! Please!!!! I mean, he is used by everybody and not one person gives a damn about him at the present time. Pretty please?
person shadow
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want harry to get severus back soon :( he's learnt his mistakes
person Nikte
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story today, and I couldn
person jadedragon
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I really like Ron and Hermione but I think that now they are using Severus... not the same way Charlie wanted to use him but may be to help Ron and Hermione to have a baby, either Hermione getting pregnant from Severus (if Ron is the problem) or Severus becoming pregnant trying to please his master (if Hermione is the problem) either way they don't care about him, helping him get better. Ron took advantage of the situation and grabbed Severus to use him to help them.

Harry took Severus for granted, but he has realised that and he truly cares for Severus and he will soon realise that he loves him. Please have Severus returned to him soon, please.

As usual a great chapter
person Leentjef
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep up thegood work and post soon
bye bye