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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person poohbear74
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and another great chapter!
person Nikte
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it was a short chapter, but it was really sweet, so I'm not going to complain lol Nevertheless I
person Spiceholmes
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue with this story, I love were you are going with this. It made me feel everything both of them were going true and that is very hard to do.

So keep it up, and hope to see more for this story. Your are a really talented writer.
person AkaneIkeda
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, sweet and sensitive chapter... like it..
person Leentjef
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good kaap going and post soon
bye bye
person kunitsu
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was just sweet, I can imagine how Severus would look like holding onto the slates that Harry has given him. The sex scene was hot but was also very sweet
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww pooor baby Sev can't feel the end.
lol he has a PDA thingy!! but he wants the slates. thats soooo adorable!!! *SQUEEEE
goodness i love them together!!!!!!!
Great Chapter!!!
Can't wait until the next chappie!!!
-Kyle
person jadedragon
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perfect
person veracityrulesUK
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter EVER!!!! Get the rest uploaded, pronto.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tear* awww poor severus and harry... always to be separated....