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by tana97

schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Title? "A teespoon Missing" or "Desparate measures". Ron's lost his mind!
person da1datnevawas
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story it's one of my favs!

Keep writing
person Leentjef
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
post soon
bye
person k9asylum
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Title for 16???? Seems like Ron is guilty of the same sin he accused Harry of so how about "Sanctimous Hypocrite Asshole"?








person cravedom
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so heart melting!

I wanted to point out that you have managed to have a plot with a sub-plot without having any evil characters and that is unusual and very enjoyable. Well, OK Charlies is an asshole but he is not a megalomanic fiend. The thing is that while the situation is by no means normal, (slavery, magic etc) the characters behavior is very believable. The result is a story that is simply moving.
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even if it was short, it was a good short chapter! i love harry and snape!!! i half wish he could go back to harry fully, but then he wouldn't be able to say no, but then he wouldn't need to be with Ron...grr challanges...lol ^_^
can't wait until the next chappie!!
-Kyle
person kunitsu
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thier relationship is just great and I love it.
person veracityrulesUK
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cheers for the update! Great as usual and can't wait with for the next one.
person mls1971
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the new chapters were great!!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!1 i hope you update again soon!!!!!!!!!
person Leentjef
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good chapter keep up the good work and post soon
bye bye