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for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

by tana97

person kunitsu
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow everything is really going good for Severus and I hope it continues. I am glad the Malfoys arent bad here
person spiceholmes
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderful to know that you put a new chapter up, and like always you deliver a great one at that.

Happy New Year, Have a wonderful time, and see you next year.

and I'm still begin for the next chapter(More,more,more,more!)
person mls1971
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Demanding?! Demanding?! Well, yes... we can be very demanding really but what do you expect when you write such 'on the edge of your seat' fanfiction? It serves you right! Can't wait for the next instalment.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
person Leentjef
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mm very very good keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person cravedom
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you think that lotion Mimi used on Sev would work on other body parts? I get tired of tripping over by boobs.

Is Harry able to take Severus on a date of some sort? I mean other that the Friday dinner/stay over. That would be hard to plan; right?

Oh since Sev can use a computer; can they chat? Um, I am thinking about this too much...
person Spiceholmes
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! It was worth the wait...you did deliver it.
Like always a perfect chapter.

More,more,more,more (Yeah I'm begging)
person Nikte
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is continues to be a wonderful and interesting story - It is a great read