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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story has started! Please continue, can't wait to see how it goes! =]
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brillent, when's the next chapter?
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing story and good language. Will be waiting for the next chapter! ^_^
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting plese continue :-)
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that you have a wonderful beginning here. Doesn't every girl have those moments where she feels not good enough or thinks she isn't as pretty as she actually is? It's easy to relate to Hermione in this story so far. Draco, I feel for him, put in a position by his self-serving father that no boy should ever be in. I can't wait to see how you bring these to two souls together...
Keep up the good work!!!!
Lady B*
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a great start. I really love the way you got inside the characters. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost cried you know I love this story very very much
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. I really enjoy emotional Dramione. I really enjoyed how introspective Hermione gets, but at the same time, I feel that she is stronger than when she is at her supposed weakest. Am really wondering where you are going to take this story....really intriguing beginning
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Hermione is so realistic, and thats what makes this so heartbreaking! This is beautifully written, and i cannot wait to see where you take us with this one!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very interesting. your plot so excellent, I love and pls keep going =D