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for Pretty Girl

by StarKneazle

schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is off to a promising start! I hope you will update regularly, I hate when I like something and then it takes forever to get another helping of it =).(yes, I am hinting LOL) Its funny how two people can like each other and never gather up the courage to let the other know. But when they do it can be a very beautiful thing......keep going! lovely story


Happy Writing!
S_G
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Dare I guess this story is a variation of "The Education of Miss Granger?" Except this is more introspective and emotional? You totally rock!!!
person loolupe
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so beautifully done. So poignant. I love to read angst, and from the looks of this first chapter, I will probably like this story a lot. Great job.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shite, I love it!
person lina
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing start!! please continue.
person kazfeist
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning! Update soon, ok? I'd like to see what year you've set this in, and whether Draco will bear the Dark Mark. :D
person rw18
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapeter, you must write more soon!! you really caputured the essence of hermione and i think Draco's reaction to himself liking her is spot on!
well written, only a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes.
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schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my friggin' god! I love it to pieces. You have to update immediately! Your faithful reader, InLoveWithLove
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was great!
person Rosamund
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really lovely...more soon?