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for Pretty Girl

by StarKneazle

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic love!! I haven't checked yet to see the last time you updated it, but I have confidence you won't abandon it. I know you are busy with school, and all that, and I feel special that you use your free time to create and share such wonderful stories with us. As always, I will wait patiently for updates, education comes first. But I do know that fanfiction is a great stress reliever/sanity restorer. ^.^ XXOO I just Hermione, and Draco, and Lucius, and more recently Severus, but my absolute favorite, is Hermione/Sirius. ^.^ XXOO
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot, on your reccomendation I listened to the Ani DiFranco song as I read CH 1, and you're right, it was absolutely perfect, and it made me want to cry. Poor Hermione. I sympathize with her. I was sort of a Hermione in school, bushy curly hair, bookworm, and all. I used to read as I walked from class to class, earning me the nickname 'Belle', ( i was at an awkward stage, glasses, braces, and bushy curly hair. Didn't grow into my looks until after HS) and was probably the only person in the history of my school to get in trouble for reading. And being a Drama geek didn't help either. LOL. So yes, I love that song, it is a perfect anthem for 'Hermione's' everywhere!!!
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! The way you portray Hermione is very realistic and true to her character and I think Draco is too. I can't wait to see where you take this, please update soon!

RRK

Oh, and I listened to the song you posted in the first chapter, it's AMAZING!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OoOO. ch. 1. Me likes....so a secret obsession? Interesting. I like a slightly obsessed troubled Draco and I'm glad that Hermione is equally troubled. Hope they can fix each other : D Now was that last line about her looks or something else I wonder? Nice start...onto ch. 2
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2. Ah, so it was about her looks. Nice, I like how they're both tormented by his admission on the tower. hahaha. Go Draco, wank yourself to death. I'm glad he realizes that wanking will only get him so far. She's turning him against all things Slytherin eh? I sense a confrontation and some major angst coming up. I love Hermione's musings as well. there's humor in both of their thoughts which I appreciate considering how conflicted they're both feeling. More please : )
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i reallllly love this story!
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say your imagery is perfect. Your attention to every detail just makes everything you write that much more enjoyable. I am enthralled with this story already and I hope you continue it. There are just so many great things that can come of this situation. Your story is the first one I have read in a while that just has that thread of intrigue I am really relating to. This situation is similar to the one that brought me and my husband together. Please continue. I will be reading. Thank you.
person foreverlove
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a amazing story! I hope you keep writing regularly. its been a long time since there was a story this good, i can't wait for the next chapters.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that's good idea to put fun fact of each chapter for readers to read. It's quiet a break.

Well, the second chapter is very UST lol I can feel tension all around! not only sexually but tension from Snape and his infamous potion class too. It's very hilarious to me that Snape always forbids student to not help other student lol though I think it's a bit weird. Well, it's Snape, how can we predict that? lol

Anyway I hope to read more too. Just don't get too much UST and give in soon! :P
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is certainly amazing how two little words can change your life and the perception you have of the people in it. Whether it's They're wrong, I;m Sorry , or I'm here, there is so much meaning packed into it.

I'm not surprised Draco's initial reaction to her is physical, after all he is a teenage boy, but to have been dwelling on it and wishing that he did not have to act a certain way around her, it is most definitely deeper than that.

Hermione is as confused as any young girl should be, after all she knows what the students think of her and her worst enemy is telling her that they are wrong when he should be agreeing with them. Talk about a puzzler.....LOL

These two lost souls need each other to feel complete...I look forward to seeing it happen!

Brilliant update!!

Lady B*

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